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Across The Wire Vol. 8

UNITED CRUSHERS

by P.G. McNabb

I.

           Tufts of prairie 

Surround a driftless industrial

Cathedral, with elephant skin

And stained glass pox of spray paint.

The volume of grain demanded

Enormous gear to grind the silage

Which one time made the air breathe thick 

As batter; it’s heavy, still, but with different

Refinement: dust, asbestos, the grist of time

Inhaled by young persons in search

Of palliatives for boredom. “Abandoned”

Could not describe those buildings: they capture

Attention. Everything is interesting

When it’s out of order, out of the order

Obscuring a dream – a petty misdemeanor

Graffiti can’t wake from. It’s hard to imagine

The last days the mill was operational,

That there ever was any purpose beside 

The curiosity served as a ruin of our own.

Barbarous children must also have trashed

The Acropolis before the couple

Hundred necessary years had passed

To make it a monument of something

We will always be too young to remember.

Flour built a temple, too, for people need

To eat some bread and earn some dough and 

Spray some paint, so there might be an ornament.

Different people come for different things

But all enthralled by the broken casements 

On bygone work of hidden generations 

Who built our world and left 

Some wasted castles behind haphazard.

II.

Efforts were made by sealing entrances

To reduce the risks for personal injury.

Getting inside was never the same way 

Twice. Once, an open window granted

Passage to the ground-floor level. 

Generators rusted in the damp – depressed

And inutile – like a third-rate

Duchamp gathering vacant fuel

In an ancient lot. A sepia shroud dressed

The dead room, stagnant water glittered. 

By keeping tight to the wall, you could creep

Around, reach the stairs, and make your way

To successive galleries of babbling graffiti. 

Across that concrete canvas, talent 

Was interrupted and often crowded 

By amateurism – as in any museum. 

III.

But vandals only deface what’s valueless

To them; so when style was in the room,

Rules were observed: like no one fucked with

The really good graffiti, and if they did,

Their tag would suffer a thousand imprecations

From connoisseurs who saw it the same way 

Modernists see the activists 

Throwing motor oil on Vincent Van Gogh. 

There are many among us who hear 

Only half the music. 

          But one sterling

Mural in black & white remained

Unchallenged by the recursive tags of

Disparate crews that dripped from the wall 

Like bukkake. Depicted was a cartoon city

Alight with black flame: humanoid wolves

Bore cyclops eyes, stalked the streets,

And cracked civilians with ebony clubs. 

A simple lyric, maybe title, hung at

The left in capital letters: RATIONAL

ANIMAL. But there wasn’t a tag

To take the credit. 

       Danger increased

With every elevation. Aluminum stairs

Moved from story to story. Machinery,

Shoots, and gothic levers stood patiently

Waiting to resume the work that kept on

Somewhere else – a protestant sense 

Of wakefulness. But there were signs

Of someone resting – mattress, empties,

Orange caps, panties, jackknife, bloody.

Darker forms of life had filled the vacuum:

A process paralleled in shipwreck.

The diver must fear what he finds

Plucked from land and plunged through fathoms

Of time tearing apart the matter, returning

Each object to prima materia. 

            A sense of being

Underwater was also felt at three hundred

Feet in the air – the top of the mill

Awarded surveillance over the city

To the morbidly curious who cleared 

The top unseen. Unknown is how the

Eponymous tag was rolled on fourteen

Consecutive grain elevators – a silo

For every letter in UNITED CRUSHERS.

Everyone authors the story: anecdotes

Circulate – a friend of a friend

Of a friend will know a guy in the

Crew, but still they can’t clarify

The obvious technical challenges

That marvel the metro audience. 

IV.

It happened at night. 

Were grappling hooks used? Or

Did they paint it upside-down? 

How many hours – start to finish?

Mu-dog said they were drunk and dangled

Each other by ankles to roll on the piece.

The work’s placement upset a losing

Proposition, challenging gallery standards. 

V.

Breadth of triumph widens in relation

To its means and their concealment from 

Our understanding. Nobody understands

Exactly how the painting was completed,

And even if they could, they couldn’t comprehend

The risk involved in pulling it off and why

Anyone would want to take it. 

 Enigma

Enfolded on enigma bind to suggest an 

Achievement. Life was staked against

The mark and cultic fame flourished.

It’s for these reasons, UNITED CRUSHERS

Must be considered a MAJOR WORK. The 

City claims it for its landmark, another

Aesthetic insurrection absorbed by 

An institution – vandalism canonized

As infrastructure. And shadows 

Cast round its stature: chronicles of

Death, assault, and drug manufacture

Inspired the total foreclosure of egress:

Immovable mass of concrete placed

In front of doors and ground-level windows.

The palimpsestic gallery of graffiti is

Entombed and inaccessible for further

Consideration – murals borne on fugitive

Minds cast back to their hollows and pulled 

From the audience, practically nonexistent.

But nothing forgotten ever is lost,

And minor work gets cut off the line.

The highest point was reached by spry drunks

With white paint – and there they left 

Their mark on the wintering imagination 

Of Minneapolis, Minnesota.


P.G. McNabb lives and writes in Minneapolis. His work also appears in The Metropolitan Review, Reap Thrill, and SPECTRA.